Ok looks ok for a first attempt. Hopefully there will be another example or two
Hi - can you tell me anything I could do better? I'm aware you've asked on multiple threads for liveries at the same time, which is a tad rude if you ask me, but I'm still willing to do your work. I am human, so instead of being passive aggressive and telling me I should do multiple liveries, please give me constructive feedback on what you want. Thanks