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First attempt at a livery, looking for feedback.


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MoeKitsune

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So I decided that I would take a shot at making a livery for my next ingame airline, and here it is. It's supposed to be more of a retro look with the stripes. I don't like some parts of it, but I can't really figure out what. I would like some feedback in case I make a new version of the livery.

 

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100% original



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FlyHighAviator

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The fact the titles are the wrong font, try dafont.com... 

Titles are too far backwards, colours are too bright and dont match, and its quite boring...


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MoeKitsune

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Thanks. I'll take that into account while redesigning it later.



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Rosser95

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I'd say for your first go, Its really good! I've no idea how to even start and try this kind of thing.  



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ginervra the 737 MAX 8

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Not terrible. I would recommend toning down the colors, and maybe reversing the direction they go (rather than have a white underbelly, have a green one, i.e). I would also recommend putting  registration and flag on the plane (the flag being that of the country of origin)
But good job overall



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You may want to go with a different name because there's already an airline named Heartland Airlines in the gallery.

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Not bad, but you forgot to add little details on the livery. Like boeing logo or aircraft registration. It's a good start.



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First thing first, it needs a logo. It really, really needs a logo.

Also: http://www.airline-e...tland-airlines/


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