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[Denver.]

DEAR AIRCRAFT CHARIMAN

 

 

 

WE ARE PLEASE TO ANNOUNCE THE START OF THE NEW ALLIANCE ASIAN AIRLINE ENTRANCE INTO THE ALLIANCE IS FREE OF COST AND IS OPEN TO ALL AIRLINE WE KINDLY REQUEST YOU TO JOIN THE ALLIANCE AS EARLY AS POOSIBLE SO WE CAN GET THE DOCUMENTS READY AND RESERVE YOUR SEAT IN ONE OF THE WORLDS BEST ALLIANCE

 

 

KINDLY JOIN TO THE EARLIEST LIMITED SEATS AVA-LIBEL

 

 

CHAIRMAN AND PRESIDENT

 

 

ASIAN TEAM

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Whatever]

All-caps!!!

 

Sorry about that, but in all seriousness, don't post a forum thread about an alliance you've made, unless it's an actual forum alliance.

[Alfrenzo]

Corrections in red.

 

DEAR AIRCRAFT CHAIRMAN

 

 

 

WE ARE PLEASED TO ANNOUNCE THE START OF THE NEW ALLIANCE ASIAN AIRLINE, ENTRANCE INTO THE ALLIANCE IS FREE OF COST AND IS OPEN TO ALL AIRLINES. WE KINDLY REQUEST YOU TO JOIN THE ALLIANCE AS EARLY AS POSSIBLE SO WE CAN GET THE DOCUMENTS READY AND RESERVE YOUR SEAT IN ONE OF THE WORLD'S BEST ALLIANCE.

 

 

KINDLY JOIN TO THE EARLIEST (as early as possible - was that the meaning intended?) LIMITED SEATS (usually it is spaces, not seats) AVAILABLE.

 

 

CHAIRMAN AND PRESIDENT

 

 

ASIAN TEAM

 

Pretty decent. We've probably seen worse.