My first attempt at making graphics went terribly. But I'm back, and reasonably better.
First off, here's a logo and livery concept for Ross's airline, Bluestar Airlink.
This next set if for Old Lao Wai Airlines:
Lastly, here's a JetEurope aircraft I made for BobzeSoviet a while back.
If you'd like to request one of my mediocre liveries, please post a response here or send me a PM.
Otherwise, feel free to comment and give me some critiques on my work- but remember that I'm no amazing livery artist.
M.F. Ensembleson's Graphics: Take 2
Started by M.F. Ensembleson, Dec 11 2012 03:13 AM
#1
Posted 11 December 2012 - 03:13 AM
"We do what we must, because we can."
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#2
Posted 12 December 2012 - 05:25 AM
To be honest, i find that the design is a bit..well crap. With Blue Star airlink, the wave is massive and then it becomes a straight line. It just doesn't work in my eyes. An alternative option would be make the wave shorter and make it carry for a further distance along the fuselage.
Old Lao Wai... i find that white gap in the fuselage to be distracting and once again it doesn't work in my eyes. Also the font choice seems a bit poor.
Now JetEurope, the orange glow on the black font seems a bit odd for an aircraft livery. A better font could be used. Also, what is that spikey ball on the tail? I realise it's a symbol/logo but it looks more like a logo that would be on a shield in a medieval war..
Old Lao Wai... i find that white gap in the fuselage to be distracting and once again it doesn't work in my eyes. Also the font choice seems a bit poor.
Now JetEurope, the orange glow on the black font seems a bit odd for an aircraft livery. A better font could be used. Also, what is that spikey ball on the tail? I realise it's a symbol/logo but it looks more like a logo that would be on a shield in a medieval war..
#3
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Posted 12 December 2012 - 05:34 AM
Congratulations, you receive the livery critiquer of the week, an award sponsored VERY PROUDLY by Speed Bird.
Anyways, what you said is true, however it doesn't make me dislike these pieces of work. And usually I am one to prefer more typical designs. However I do agree that you need a new font for the jetEurope livery.
These designs are not prototypical concepts and I applaud MF for the decision to go outside of the box.
Anyways, what you said is true, however it doesn't make me dislike these pieces of work. And usually I am one to prefer more typical designs. However I do agree that you need a new font for the jetEurope livery.
These designs are not prototypical concepts and I applaud MF for the decision to go outside of the box.
#4
Posted 12 December 2012 - 06:33 AM
well if its up to gen 5, why would you give MF gen 3. I withdraw my comments about the JetEurope logo in that case.
#5
Posted 13 December 2012 - 01:52 AM
ar, thanks for letting me know, and I agree with many of them. As Bobze pointed out, all I did was throw a little color into the design, the reason the logo isn't there is becuase I didn't make it.
Ace, thanks as well. Looking back, if I could have, I would have. Not my favorite ever, but meh, it can only get better.
Ace, thanks as well. Looking back, if I could have, I would have. Not my favorite ever, but meh, it can only get better.
"We do what we must, because we can."
Reintroducing Ensemble Holdings, commencing operations Summer 2014.
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