2012 | PON Riau XVII

I appreciate the effort here (particularly the smaller details like the Star Alliance logo, Reg, and flag) but I have a few comments, criticisms, and concerns.

Criticism: I think the tail is a bit bland - what about some shades of red and orange is supposed to say Indonesia (or really anything) to me?

Concern: I think the Sporting event logo at the front is a tad big - It wouldn't need to be much smaller to look like they reasonably were just really proud of the sponsorship but its oversize as is.

Comment: This will probably get memed but we a convention here on the gallery is limiting posting to a smaller number (2 or 3) per day just so that other people's work can also get seen on the front page and so that the front page of the gallery is more diverse (regardless of whether I like the Eastern Indonesian livery, it become less interesting when I see 6 different permutations of it all at once).

Criticism: I think the titles are too big on the fuselage - they would be really warped and particularly the INDONESIA text being almost entirely below the windows would look really weird because that title would mostly be facing the ground.

Concern: I like the idea of the Stylized E but I think it strays too far from being an E (nad the different colour doesn't help) but it doesn't look like the titles on the aircraft say Eastern it looks like astern with a logo in front of it.

Comment: Maybe try making the E logo on the fuselage grayscale the better match the rest of the titles and then integrate the colourful E logo somewhere on the tail.

Okay, Thankyou for your effort on the comment and advices. Yep, for the design maybe i should make some improvement and change to make it more unique, clear and also make it more Indonesian. Tbh, i already make the "rebrand" for this airlines and will upload it in the next update, but still need some of your advices for improvement. And also i'm sorry for upload too many picture at once.I will post less in the next time.