Jasper 747B

Unsure what to think about this. 

The title font is a bit weird, and the upside down diamond has no explained significance.

The Tail swoop also seems a bit too steep to me 

Agree with Zipp about the font and the upside-down diamond. Also think that the titles should be moved further up, away from the cheatline.

Unsure what to think about this. 

The title font is a bit weird, and the upside down diamond has no explained significance.

The Tail swoop also seems a bit too steep to me 

the diamond is supposed to represent the Jasper Gemstone. I couldn't do much since jaspers aren't really cut into any distinguishable shapes except blob

Agree with Zipp about the font and the upside-down diamond. Also think that the titles should be moved further up, away from the cheatline.

I see your point, but I did it intentionally, so that the text is part of the cheatline. Thought it would be a bit unique

This is quite nice! Though, I would've done a 180 on the jasper, it looks a bit odd. Even if it cut off, I think people would still get the point. And next time try adding a bit more detail like aircraft type, registration etc. to it.

the diamond is supposed to represent the Jasper Gemstone. I couldn't do much since jaspers aren't really cut into any distinguishable shapes except blob

 

That doesn't explain that. It's not a weird shape, it's a standard diamond shape that's upside down, and we're asking why is it upside down.

 

I see your point, but I did it intentionally, so that the text is part of the cheatline. Thought it would be a bit unique

 

If you were trying to integrate the text into the cheatline, then I think the execution could be improved, at least so that the bottom ends of the J and the S don't rise back up past the cheatline.