- The colors are good but they could be better - maybe make a metallic effect with the yellow by using a gradient to make a kind of gold color? Red could also be a little more bold and dramatic.
- Hongkong air should be written as Hong Kong Air instead, and all the same font size.
- Still too large with the website address on the engine cowling.
- Be sure to mask off the fuselage before painting on it; it doesn't look good if the livery goes beyond the borders of the plane.
Those are the main things to work on with this livery. But you're already improving quickly!
Ok, so again, not bad for a starter.
- The colors are good but they could be better - maybe make a metallic effect with the yellow by using a gradient to make a kind of gold color? Red could also be a little more bold and dramatic.
- Hongkong air should be written as Hong Kong Air instead, and all the same font size.
- Still too large with the website address on the engine cowling.
- Be sure to mask off the fuselage before painting on it; it doesn't look good if the livery goes beyond the borders of the plane.
Those are the main things to work on with this livery. But you're already improving quickly!