'Rio' is kinda abstract (?) and informal. see, there are 3 states named 'Rio' in Brazil, there are more than 100 cities named 'Rio' in Brazil and only in São Paulo city there are more than 200 rios. so you could make things simple and change 'Rio' for 'Rio de Janeiro'. Or not. it is your stuff and you decide how it should look like.
The ad is not bad at all, just the 'Rio' thing that kinda bothers me
'Rio' is kinda abstract (?) and informal. see, there are 3 states named 'Rio' in Brazil, there are more than 100 cities named 'Rio' in Brazil and only in São Paulo city there are more than 200 rios. so you could make things simple and change 'Rio' for 'Rio de Janeiro'. Or not. it is your stuff and you decide how it should look like.
The ad is not bad at all, just the 'Rio' thing that kinda bothers me