Okay...this is my very first livery...here goes!

Okay, guys, before you say anything, I'd just like to say that this was my very first livery of a plane that I've created (successfully) and I am open to ALL feedback.

It's a livery of a Qahat Airways (my airline in O1) 777-200ER (RR engines).

Template from Jetabout, used paint.NET for this. 

This registration is actually that of a China Southern A321...

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Interesting...

Meaning?

Well, the strange gradient makes the livery look interesting.  The lack of good shading makes it even more weird.  There's plenty of room for improvement, but since this is your first livery, I'll let you slide.

Hmmm. Its alright. Its intresting with the granite but feedback, the q is hard to read for the first time.

It's a good start. There is alot you can improve on but it's a good start.

What could be improved on?

Very good start compared to mine 

What could be improved on?

1. Shading around the edges.

As we all know, most commersial airliners are round. The very best way to simulate something round on a flat immage is by shading around the edges. Without shading, the aircraft looks very flat and not really that colourfull either.

2. Colouring in wherever it's needed.

If you take a good look at the livery itself, you may notice a few "white spots" not only around the edges, but also around the "wing cartridges", elevator, back door, back "exhaust pipe", e.t.c. You can remove these by colouring them in a similar colour scheme of what is around them. This is to make the plane look as real as possible. Look at some other liveries up close to get a good idea.

3. Perfecting the dimensions.

The livery dimensions AE uploads in is 800x300. Looking at your livery in your airline details page, it looks very squashed horisontally/stretched vertically. Try making any future liveries in 800x300 or anything similar to that in order to prevent squashing or stretching.

That's all the things I found you can improve on and I hope this helps

Ps. I'm not an expert on airplane parts.