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what should I change?

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The first thing you should do is to not use JetAbout templates. Ever. They don't look good and usually create a bunch of artifacts (those white specks) upon painting them, which are very hard to get rid of. We have our own templates available for use here that look much better, albeit a bit harder to use.

 

Now onto the actual livery. I have a bunch of things to say, so I'll put them into a list.

  • I'm not a fan of the color of the cobra logo you have there. It's the same colour as the rest of the tail which makes it harder to see. 
  • Don't use default fonts. It's pretty clear you're using one here, and they look bland, generic, and unoriginal.
  • Why does the cheatline end at the wings? It kind of pisses off my OCD, you should probably do something with it.
  • The yellow thing below the text? I'm not sure about how it looks.
  • There's no registration or flag. While I'm on the subject, don't use a default font for the reg; it looks just as bad.

I'm guessing this is your first livery, and compared to many others this is alright. Keep going, and you'll probably make some great things in the future :)


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I have one question, how do I colorize the new templates without getting rid of the shines/shadows? I usually select the background, invert the selection, and just trace around the windows. Also, I'm going to use a different font that I downloaded for a project, and make the cobra gold (and get rid of the cheatline for a stripe instead)



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Nevermind I just realised the format has multiple layers lol



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Revised version:

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Revised version:

Still don't like the cobra. Perhaps use a different logo instead?

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Changes:

-Cobra replaced with tiger

-Registration has a Vietnamese flag instead of American

-Engines show Vietnamese flag

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Just realised I changed it from VietSky to VietFly. Oops.



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Adrian Burke

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And agent orange

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Any other thoughts? S4B resets tomorrow, so I have to finalize it soon.



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I'm not sure what people are saying, the cobra is awesome and appropriate for Vietnam.  The only issue is that something needs to be figured out with the yellow/white; should it flair out more in the wings (not actually wings, but the part that flairs out)  It does look a little wonky, but I bet there's a way you could make it work.



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I'm going with the tiger for now, but I might revise the design with a snake down the road.



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Make it your own logo it looks to much like a image from the internet which I suspect it is

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Make it your own logo it looks to much like a image from the internet which I suspect it is


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It is not. I drew it as promotional material for my old school, whose mascot was a tiger, and colored it yellow.



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Well make something less like a clip art if that’s the case




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