A340 NY Yankees

Lines do noooot work well on the fuselage at all, maybe just the tail.

The New York Yankees titles could be smaller and be placed over the windows or above. The "27 Time World Series Champions" titles could be a lot smaller, not be in Papyrus font, and be further back towards the rear door.

Tail looks great though.

Thanks for the feedback it will help me moving forwards.

tbh not the best. Not realistic enough.

tbh not the best. Not realistic enough.

Why don't you try to make one yourself?

The execution is poor, indeed, but the idea is actually interesting.

Schotz, I suggest you redo this. Follow Nx's feedback, or you can also have mine:

• give the lines brighter colour (almost white), or set it very transparent.
• Instead making the title smaller, make it billboard big to cover the whole fuselage. Change the colour to a dark-greyish-blue.
• I agree with Nx, the "27 Time World Series Champions" titles could be a lot smaller, and with different typeface, but put it in the front, below the windows.
• The tail is already good.

Thanks for all the great suggestions I will hopefully get it redone within a couple days.