Jaspers First Aircraft / Liveries

http://www.airline-e...21-jasper-747b/My feedback buy and large remains the same with respect to the gemstone and the font.

I do like the fuselage scheme on the 707 tho, all in all, decent work

fuse is nice, font makes sense for the era

+ what zipp said about the logo

congrats, your first genuinely good livery

Change the font perhaps to something a little wider and a little less bold, maybe even give it some italics, and find a better logo. Alternatively, you could make a logo yourself, which might not seem as good as one from the internet now, but it will do you better in the long run as it allows you to make a bespoke, recognizable logo in the future as your skills develop.

Kinda wish the F27 had the same cheatline treatment as the 707. Also don't think the registration should intersect the cheatline. Despite that (and the points others have made), this is genuinely good and you're really improving.

Kinda wish the F27 had the same cheatline treatment as the 707. Also don't think the registration should intersect the cheatline. Despite that (and the points others have made), this is genuinely good and you're really improving.

the fokker is supposed to be older, hence the simpler livery

Kinda wish the F27 had the same cheatline treatment as the 707. Also don't think the registration should intersect the cheatline. Despite that (and the points others have made), this is genuinely good and you're really improving.

I wanted to do a similar cheatline for the F27, but I wanted the main cheatline to cover the windows, and then I felt adding the bottom cheatline would make it overall feel thick, and wouldn't leave much room for the belly metal