Aurora Atlantic 757-200

If I might offer some criticism:

• At first glance, I couldn't even see the text on the fuselage, its far too dark. Generally when your adding on a text layer, you want it to sharply contrast its background so it stands out. 
• Second, always make sure to clean up your lines... especially when putting the aircraft against a colored background. Specifically the borders of the aircraft. Trust me, it goes a long way. 
• Third, maybe consider adding a registration number and tail flash (Flag) to the aircraft. Little details like that go a long way. 

All things considered, definitely keep at it.

If I might offer some criticism:

• At first glance, I couldn't even see the text on the fuselage, its far too dark. Generally when your adding on a text layer, you want it to sharply contrast its background so it stands out. 
• Second, always make sure to clean up your lines... especially when putting the aircraft against a colored background. Specifically the borders of the aircraft. Trust me, it goes a long way. 
• Third, maybe consider adding a registration number and tail flash (Flag) to the aircraft. Little details like that go a long way. 

All things considered, definitely keep at it.

Also the contrast is a little to bright!

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aurora autistic

If I might offer some criticism:

• At first glance, I couldn't even see the text on the fuselage, its far too dark. Generally when your adding on a text layer, you want it to sharply contrast its background so it stands out. 
• Second, always make sure to clean up your lines... especially when putting the aircraft against a colored background. Specifically the borders of the aircraft. Trust me, it goes a long way. 
• Third, maybe consider adding a registration number and tail flash (Flag) to the aircraft. Little details like that go a long way. 

All things considered, definitely keep at it.

Thanks, I'm trying to improve

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aurora autistic

Thanks, I'm trying to improve

Just keep at it, pay close attention to highly rated liveries and study them, try to figure out what makes them good and you'll eventually get the hang of it.

Side note: bad designs are going to catch a lot of s*** here, don't be deterred by it. This forum is a tough crowd, but now and then it is worth listening to. Some people here really know their stuff when it comes to livery design.

Just keep at it, pay close attention to highly rated liveries and study them, try to figure out what makes them good and you'll eventually get the hang of it.

Side note: bad designs are going to catch a lot of s*** here, don't be deterred by it. This forum is a tough crowd, but now and then it is worth listening to. Some people here really know their stuff when it comes to livery design.

I've been here for a while, and trust me, i know But i can see why, my early liveries were... well the less said the better.